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Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Penetrated ........ Prose Poem


She...
Smooth, soft to the touch is its texture
Tall, wide, hard as a mountain is its under layer
Thrust, pressure, is the start
Inhale, then breath is held
Anomalous is the facial expression
Opened slowly like a flower on a hot summer day, is the beginning
Pressure, stretched is the feel
Tense, tight, are my muscles
Pain, pleasure, overwhelms my feelings
Erotic sensations, override my brain
Back arch from its rapture
Mouth opens, the sound of a gasp slips out, as my lungs exhale
Dig, sharp, are my red painted nails
Erotic, is its feel, as it slowly opens then fall into my pink domain
Penetrations, into one's domain is the action
Pure pleasure is the beginning 

HE...
Soft moist to the touch
Pressure, pliable is the feel
Quick inhale fills the lungs
Arms muscles flex, back bow inward, buttocks tighten, stomach flattens as its harden flesh sinks deeper
Sharpen pain, pleasurable sensations run into one's brain
Wet, hot heat, velvet soft is the feel on ones inner texture
Resisting tightness, slickness, is felt on ones girth, as ones harden texture slides downward
Sensational feelings, overwhelms ones loins
First penetration of the night is the action
Complete feel of eroticism is the reaction
Blissful cumvulsions is the ending



14 comments:

  1. Pain, pleasure, overwhelms my feelings
    Erotic sensations, override my brain
    Back arch from its rapture
    Mouth opens, the sound of a gasp slips out, as my lungs exhale.... oh yes!! such powerful words that have a way of leading the mind back to the actual act. I enjoyed this poem very much 1manview.

    xo,
    kitten

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  2. Amigo bonito como sempre
    bela imagem
    um beijo
    Princesa

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  3. Kitten, I'm glad you liked it, after all, you planted the seed in my head...

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  4. Princesa, obrigado meu amigo, um beijo para você também ..

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  5. That's so amazing. You are incredibly talented. Thankfully I'm at home now, and able to - ahem - take care of what needs to be taken care of.

    Can't wait for the next one.

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  6. Thank you Maxie, please come again...(smile)

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  7. Prometo traducirlo todo para poder entenderlo
    One kiss, un beso

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  8. Que a alegria da Páscoa

    invada o seu coração

    e o daqueles a quem ama,

    irradiando luz para iluminar

    e fazer brilhar o mundo em

    que vivemos, enchendo-o de

    AMOR, SAÚDE, PAZ

    Feliz Páscoa
    um beijo

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  9. New follower my dear - and I'm entranced already. I can't wait for more! Excellent work.

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  10. IMAGEM DELICIAAA!!! GRATA POR VISITAR E ME ACOMPANHAR NAS POESIAS
    BJUS COM CARINHO .

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