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Thursday, May 21, 2009

Surrender_ I ... Picture Poem

This picture was given to me by my friend pebbles, who also inspired the poem for it...


Come... Take me, I surrender
Touch me... Slowly, gently, with a soft caress
Ease your fingers over every inch of my starving flesh
Massage me, almost to a gentle sleep
Let your fingers roam, over the contours of my bosom, the erectness of my nipples, then sweep downward and caress the roundness of my bottom, while filling me completely with desire
Then awaken me, with your deep touch of lust that will enlighten my soul, with a passionate flow
Gently touch my wetness, and complete my surrender with the anticipation of completeness
I am yours to keep, to want, to have, to hold
Now embrace me, with the gentle touch of your lips on mine
Embrace my lips again, this time with passion, a passion that builds an inner fire
that warms me inside out, until my flesh sweat
Then extend yourself into me, and bring up the warmth my body aches for, my mind begs for, my soul weeps for
Coat my insides, with the texture of you
Take all of me, I surrender, but once you release me, make sure I am full of your undying love

12 comments:

  1. TE SUSURRO AL OIDO.......!!!HAZME TUYA AMOR!!!
    Caricias amor

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  2. It blows my mind that you can write from a female point of view. Makes me wonder if you can read our minds? As always, such a lovely poem my gifted friend :-)

    xo,
    kitten

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  3. I have been accuse of being a woman using a man handle. I always love how woman wrote with more inner feelings then most men. So I try to put myself in a woman prospective at times. But reading a women mind, now that would be a good trick...

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  4. Semeia de flores teu chão
    E abre a janela aos perfumes do ar,
    E esquece tua porta entreaberta,
    Porque na hora certa
    Verás teu poeta surgir
    E entrar e abraçar-te chorando
    E amar-te até quando
    Tiver que partir.
    um beijo

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  6. I love your blog
    I loved the photo
    kisses

    Hellena

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  7. Hellena .. Obrigado, eu realmente gosto de seu blog também ...

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