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Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Happy Thirsty Thursday Picture Poem (Double Etheree)

Eyes,

Focus

On his stiff

Hard erection,

My mouth opens wide,

As his scent is inhaled,

Clear running lubrication

Of drool, drips downward on my chin,

Heart races like a thoroughbred’s horse

As my mind anticipates my first taste


Lips ease over large round sensitive gland,

Legs tighten from pleasurable pain,

As lips ease forward and backward,

His erection is suckled

Like a Tootsie roll pop

For the prize inside,

Scrotum squeezed tight,

Vibrations,

White seed,

Freed


Please bear with me as I try to learn to write a Etheree Poem... A Etheree

Poem consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

16 comments:

  1. wow!
    are delicious image and words!
    love it ...
    sip, suck ... enjoy !...( lol)

    His poems are exciting and delicious!
    congrats!

    kiss your heart!

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  2. Thank you Nancy C. And i think I will go enjoy a sip and suck... lol ...

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  3. Nice visual my friend! You just keep on writing and thrilling us with your erotic poetry. We love it!

    xo,
    kitten

    p.s. I shut down my blog.

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  4. @ complicated Kitten,,, You can't leave me here alone, after alll, you brought me here and showed me a new life style. So after your break, please come back...

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  5. @ Green Eye Frenchy... thank you much...

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  6. this poem is very sexy, I like alot. and that picture is so hot. I always enjoy your poems

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  8. Ops sorry I can't spell. Delicious indeed :)

    Love,
    Ronnie
    xx

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  9. Poetic_Butterfly , thank you, and please come again...

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  10. ronnie, that's OK,.. I'm the master of missed spell words... Thank you for the comment...

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  11. Deliciously erotic imagery coupled with beautiful poetic rhythm. Gorgeous... xx

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  12. The visuals are great I can see the heat in this.

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  13. Cheeky Minx, thanks much, I appreciate comments from one of my favorite poets..

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  14. Sueie, thank you for checking my place out, and leaving a comment... I shall return the favor...

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