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Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Anticipation...... A Song Poem Challege......

A Poem Song (In my case) is when "Words or a Sentence" has been used from the song to write a poem. The poem must also read in the rhytmn of the song...

The Bar Kays === Anticipation





Sweet smell of air scented with the fragrance of Vanilla, filters through their nostrils moments before being consumed by their lungs...
White candlelight shines through the darkness of the room,
Silhouettes of naked just friends standing front to front reflected off the wall, as anticipation fueled their desires, and carnal lust loomed inside their loins...
Faces find closure,
Eyes close,
Lips parts,
Breaths inhale...
Just before lips touch,
Anticipation of first kiss, takes their breath away....
Split second turns into an eternity,
As lips meet and greet...
Naked flesh shivers,
Goose bumps run down spines,
As the hunger of shear passion surrounds their sexual hungry souls,
While anticipation of unadulterated sex unfolds in their minds...
Fingertips touch wet sexes,
As anticipation of sex entering sex exhilarate inside minds...
Legs muscles oscillate as soft fingertips grip then slide up and down elongated harden flesh,
Anticipation of premature expulsion comes close to a reality, as a megaton of keen sensations never felt before, explodes inside loins...
Tight grip around small waist leave small feet dangling in air,
Hearts race, as anticipation of bodies intertwine as one laying down on the large, soft, mattress of the bed in front of them edges closer...
Soft fingertips grasp nape of neck,
Lips meet breasts, after lips devour the mountain of flesh in front of them; they slither down curvature of firm stomach flesh...
Lips linger on tender inner thighs, as tongue taste its surface flavor, bodies slowly form a position of sixty-nine...
Lips touch wetness, tongue protrude inward, while other set of lips meet then suckle on bare head that’s harder then steel...
Anticipation of moans and groans soon chokes the silence out the still air, as collected minds still away...
Bodies vibrate, hips softly gyrate,
One head weaves gingerly side to side, its tongue darts deeply in and out a pink pliable orifice, as the other head deeply bops up and down, while its tight griping lips surface slide up and down the sides of inflexible hard flesh...
Sounds of broken suction, slurping, gasping, whispered sexual tones, followed by moans and groans, is heard reverberating off the bedroom walls...
Bodies simultaneous stiffen then quake, as one mouth is flooded with sweet tart juices, the other is flooded with ejaculated thick white tangy sweet goo....
Dead silence enters the room, as a tongue gently swivel in a wide circle, a soft limp flesh is suckled back to hard inflexibility...
Anticipation of their final act finally becomes a reality...
Lips kiss deeply,
Anticipated long, hard, enormity, penetrates into the depths of soft pliable pinkness,
A soft audible scream mixes with the perfume air in the room, as unanticipated excruciating pleasure pain of first penetration runs through womb, then up spine, flooding the brain with sensations of mixed emotions, causing womb to flood with clear lubricating fluids...
Loud graveling moan vibrates in throat, as unanticipated tightness grips the wide girth of harden flesh firmer then most...
After the flesh of their sex meets and greets, their flesh kiss, then hug,
They kiss again, and again hug,
They kiss again and again, and then hug again and again,
When their sex flesh kisses deepens, their hug grips ever tighter...
Hips gyrate slow and deep as one, they danced in a soft, slow rhythm as if they had danced in this sexual rhythm many times before....
Bodies shiver and shutter while embracing for anticipated unisexual explosion of unreal proportions, as they near the end of their long and waited night…Of Anticipation...

6 comments:

  1. Very nice, 1manview! Even independent of the song rhythmn, it's really good poetry. But it's all the more impressive given that you've been able to fit your lines to the song's meter.

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  2. Thank you Dioneo, it was a challenge on one of the poetry sites I go too.
    A twist to keep things interesting..

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  3. intimidades, Thank you, your comments are always appreciated..

    Hugs...

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  4. zoe, Gracias

    Tienen una gran semana ...

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