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Friday, June 17, 2011

Touches... Oddquain Poems


Soft
Slow touches
Stir emotions of
Scandalous thoughts of you and
I



Lips
Swell with the
Richness of my blood
With captivated thoughts of
Love


Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines

11 comments:

  1. Lovely and a super picture to go with it.

    Here's one I like (Not my work)

    Love
    Actual
    Or an illusion
    Regardless let me feel loves
    Touch

    Touch
    Velvet
    Desired sexually
    Feelings of emotional
    High

    High
    Sexual
    Desires satisfied
    Calm restored tension destroyed
    Smile


    Have a good weekend.

    Love,
    Ronnie
    xx

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  2. I like that Ronnie. It speaks of touch witch is this month topic... And we both love that touch in one way or another.. lol...

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  3. Lovely poem... and as usual you chose the perfect picture for it.

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  4. I learned something from your post... nice form and hope I can write something like this in the future.

    Happy Friday~

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  5. I love the "scandalous" thoughts. ;-) Wonderful, erotic, sexy writing as always.

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  6. Sensacional tamdem de imagen y letras.
    un placer, siempre...

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  7. Heaven, I hope to see it soon. I'm sure it will be as nic as your prose peotry..

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  8. TemptingSweets99, as always, I appreciate your wonderful comments..

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  9. Kittycat, thanks for reading me.....

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