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Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Head day poem... Song Poem Challenge ... Butterflies .... Repetitive Style ...

A Song Poem: Must use one word, sentence or phrase from the chosen song. It also has to be written in the rhythm and spirit of the song... Song; Butterflies By Michael Jackson.... Challenge by "Poetic Estrus" ....



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Sweetness of your lips sink into mine,
A hesitant before lips intertwine,
That causes a sigh, and sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings, 
To reside between the thick, of my thighs  

Fingertips grip deeply into my hips,
As contemplated thoughts in my mind dip,
As lips sip,
The sugary sweetness of a deep genteel kiss

Naked neck flesh suckled,
Knees buckle,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs


Breast heave forward to soft kissing, licking, and tender suckles,
As soft firm lips, roams its domain, 
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Suckled nipples, suddenly impale past parted lips,
Into the warmth of his wet wanting mouth,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Stomach muscles flex to soft kisses,
That's mixed with trailing tongue lashes, 
That dashes,
Into a downward spiral,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Legs parted,
Then lifted onto wide shoulders,
Kisses of velvet mist on my thighs internees,
Faint moans slip past parted lips,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Tongue lashes,
Dashes,
Marches,
On folds that's swollen with desire,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Tongue flick,
Then dip,
Tasting the offering of pungent clear nectar before it,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Ripples of vibrations rush into my loins,
As his tongue slowly submerge into the clear wake of my wet,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs



Suckled squashy lips, ease a indulgent scream out my lungs,
As my chest heave, stomach muscle reflex, hips jerk, then slowly gyrate,
Into the rhythm of the deep lashing of his hungry tongue dips, that falls into the rising wake of my wet,
As intensified sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Right leg locks behind head,
Fingertips intertwine into pulled hair,
Urgent dance of hips gyrate deeply,
As sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Turn into intense surreal sensation of humming bird wings,
Fluttering deep in the wet, between the thick, of my thighs

Persistent quakes and shakes vibrate through my extremities,
While the steadfast dip of the tip of his tongue dive into the pink depths of 
my wet,
Hips flail in an orgasmic rhythm,
Causing suffocating breath like sounds to gurgle from his lungs,
While his tongue taste the extra sweet cream of my orgasmic release,
As intense sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Reside between the thick, of my thighs

Eyes open,
His body resides at my side,
His fingertips softly caress the outline of my oval shaped breast,
The feel of his rawness swell pulsating on the side of my thigh, send sensations of soft flutters of butterfly wings,
Deep into the wake, 
That resides, 
Between the center of my thighs...






Poetic Estrus, you have been challenge to write a reprisal to this poem ....
(I used some gif's, now are you happy?...)



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14 comments:

  1. Adorei o teu post, roubei duas fotos, espero que não te aborreça, escreves com a alma o que é digno de um grande escritor.
    Beijos
    Sofia

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    1. Obrigado lovely ...
      Tire uma foto a qualquer hora, é assim que eu tenho deles ... hehe ...


      Beijos

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  2. Love this! Can't wait to see PE's response.

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    1. Thank you Sweets, it was pointed out I hadn't done one of these poems in awhile. Now let's see what PE is going to do.. hehe ....

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  3. oh. my. god.

    i thought i had heard every one of michael jackson's songs.
    this is the first time i've heard this one. nice!

    as for what you've written here...
    i'm sitting here
    in my chair
    inappropriately grinning
    and squirming...
    inappropriately.

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    1. Like a true gentleman, I love helping woman in desire straits... :) (just kidding) ... A humble thank you for the comment lisa....

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    2. lisa, I'm surprise a music junkie like yourself didn't hear this song. They played it on the radio to death. But I never took it as a sensuous song until I had to do this poem. This song was written by someone in a British group called Floetry. Michael Jackson heard their demo and ask them if he could do it. ( who would say no to MJ) You should check out Floetry demo version on youtube...

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  4. Sexy ass write 1Man.. Hey, you know I haven't done any poem songs. You can be such a ... hehe.. OK, I have to study for a make up final. I'll get it done as you would say...

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  5. Whaa... whaa... whaa... (laughing) It's a Song poem PE .. If you get stuck, I'll give you a little push. Now, get it done young lady... :) And thanks for the comment, I appreciate it as always...

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  6. as gifs se movendo ao ritmo da música ficam mais sensuais, mais eróticas...
    realmente, dá borboletas por dentro!...rs


    beijos no coração, meu amigo!
    (lindas imagens!!)

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  7. Obrigado Nancy C, eu sempre aprecio as suas visitas ...

    Tenha uma ótima semana ...

    Kisses in your heart...

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  8. I do't know if I can o this....
    well...le's see....



    Touch and kiss you honey
    That’s my dream…my hush-hush desire…
    You should know my eyes are fire…
    And you know there are no lies…
    Can you feel the melody, baby?
    ‘Cause you, girl, give me butterflies!
    ...

    All at once...that's what I can do....
    Love the post!

    Hugs, BS

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    1. Very good BS, not only your first try, but in english too.. :)
      Thank you much for the comment...

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