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Saturday, October 6, 2012

Crash "Inside Me"... Prose poem




As his hips profoundly crashed into mines 
Enraptured sensations scurry up my spine 
My womb became inundate with womanly fluid
My mind is blanketed with lustrous visions 
While his voluminous endowment ravishes my womb.... 


1Manview © 1999 – 2012

16 comments:

  1. Mmm! Mmm! Mmm!

    Crashing hips, enraptured sensations scurrying up the spine, lustrous visions, voluminous endowment?

    Love this!

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    1. Thank you Sweets, always a pleasure...

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    1. Thank you Paula, nice to see you...

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    1. Thank you Black Angel ... Kisses ....

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  4. Awesome! Also, thank you for your kind words. We've got everything worked out and continuing to work on our communication.

    <3 Dirty Blog's Girl

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    1. Thank you, and I'm happy you worked things out...

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  5. Wow! Good stuff! Glad we ran into each other. Looking forward to more...

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    1. Thank you Desireous, I look forward to seeing you more too...

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  6. Hey, really powerful stuff. I read it this morning and it stayed with me all day. Amazing pic too. Btw, thanks for your encouragement on my blog piece. Love & kisses Sadie xxx

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    1. Thank you Sadie for coming back and leaving me a comment, they keep me going more then you know...

      Peace and love
      1Manview

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  7. Sounds like someone is having a damned good time!!

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  8. Good but "mines" is not correct. It should say MINE.

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  9. Thank you for the visit and read anonymous, but that's why I write poetry for fun. With poetry, I don't have to be politically correct, I make up my own rules...

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