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Saturday, November 10, 2012

Follow Up.......... Repetitive poem ......



From behind he slid into my shadow, and filled my ache,
His indistinguishable slow hard deep trust moved my hips,
His persistence brought in the rain, 
His tenaciousness made it thunder,
As my body jolted from his lightening strikes,
My clear liquid showered all over him...

1Manview © 1999 – 2012

10 comments:

  1. This is the kind of follow-up that I like! ;-)

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  2. I second that, Tempting Sweets... ;-)

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    1. That makes three... Thanks for the read CK..

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  3. Boa tarde bom amigo, é com toda a humildade que te peço novamente para seres meu seguidor, a minha conta adsende foi novamente recusada, portanto, já não quero nem saber, podes me visitar quando quiseres, comentar se quiseres, pois eu faço o mesmo.
    Adorei o texto e a foto.
    Beijos
    Alexandra Melo

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    1. Sinto ouvir você não conseguiu o que queria, vou visitá-lo outra vez ....

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