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Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Head Day .... TemptingSweets ......... Prose Poem



Lips
Succulent,
Surrounds 
The tip
Of his masculinity,
Heat penetrates 
Its stretched flesh,
As the softness
Of lips
Inhale his length
in one slow downward motion,
Sucking it into the darkest part
Of her wet wanting mouth,
Each bob,
Of her head, 
Leaves his over stretch flesh wetter,
And tighter,
Making
His legs shiver,
His heart race,
His mind ponder,
Until his molten core, 
Breach form his scrotum,
In an explosion of orgasmic bliss,
Filling her mouth,
With the satisfying taste,
Of him



1Manview © 1999 – 2012

12 comments:

  1. The pleasure...is that!
    So erotic..

    Kiss,big kiss

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    1. Thank you, nice to see you back MissMary...

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  2. TemptingSweets? .... hahaha ... Such a devil ... Erotic piece 1MV ...

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  3. The words made the picture alive.. not to mention my desire.
    Awesome.

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    1. Thank you H. I appreciate the comment...

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  4. LOL! I love this! One of my fave lines:
    "Sucking it into the darkest part"...

    Happy HEAD Day! ;-)

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    1. Thank you TemptingSweets :)

      Any day is a happy head day for sure.. lol ..

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  5. almost the ultimate momment of intimacy

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  6. Yes, almost.. Thank you for the read and comment Skin n Under..

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  7. I love short erotic poems that are easy to read like this. Turns me on so bad. <3

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    1. THANK YOU NATALIE, BUT I CAN BE LONG WINDED AT TIMES, SO I HOPE YOU READ THOSE TOO... :) BUT I DO APPRECIATE YOU MENTIONING IT, SO I CAN REMEMBER TO POST MORE OF MY SHORT ONES...

      1MANVIEW

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