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Saturday, January 25, 2014

The Weakness In Me ..2 Song poem ....

A Song Poem: is a poem that is written from a song, using a phrase, word or sentence from that song.
 It must also be written in the melody, rhytmn or spririt of that song..
The weakness in me by Keisha White


Guilt sensations wrap itself around me, 
as I wait for the likes of you, to have unadulterated sex with me,
I know I shouldn't let someone like you be inside of me because; 
You're thoughtless,
You're callous,
You're worthless of a handsome man,
But...Your prowess, overwhelms the being of me,
Making you, "The weakness in me"

When I see you standing at my front door, 
My womb walls start to broil,
The crotch of my panties instantly become soil,
My body becomes in waiting for more,
My heart out race all my senses,
Because you are "The weakness of me"

When I open the door, you walk right pass me without even saying hello,
And when I catch up with you at the bedroom door, 
You always meet me with that same old kiss,
The one I know all so well, and I always miss,
The one that always weakens my will,
Because it burns from the tip of my lips, 
All the way down to the tip of my toes,
Making me momentarily forgetting all life woes,
It's that kiss, that always awakens my sexual soul,
That kiss that make you "The weakness in me"

You quickly unclothe, then jump straight into my neatly made bed,
You will lay on top of my silky sheets, with the look of someone who is in great need of being sexually fed,
And after your sexual feasting, my mind will again dread,
Because you are "The weakness in me"...

You make me weak,
when your touch tenderly touch my body,

You make me sigh,
when your touch gently wipe over my swollen moist center,

You make me moan,
when your girth, widens my opening to accommodate its width,

You make my voice cry out, 
every time the weight of your length, thrust fast, hard and deep, into the taut pinkness of my sanctuary,
Making you, "The weakness in me"

My legs will wrap around you,
So you can thrust into my opening stronger, longer, fill my hole completely with your hard swollen dick,
Your hips gyrate so hard, mine will be pushed deep into the mattress,
Overwhelming my loins with electrified sensations,
Your lips will suffocate me, with their sweetness, 
While your mouth choke out my hysterical screams,
As the creamy clear nectar of my womb, leak past my swollen folds seem,
Again, making you "The weakness of me"

Lungs aspirate for air,
Body lie in a consensual heap,
Heartbeats search for feelings of love,
But only find the darkness of my despair, because 
I know this is just another one night stand with you,
But... My mind can't help to think it might be different on this gratifying night,
You are, 
"The weakness in me"...

1Manview © 1999 – 2014
A musing version of this poem is on my Intrigue blog


  1. Wow! I like how this song inspired you to write this song poem. Wonderful! Love the GIF, too!

    1. Thank you , I really can relate to this song. I'm glad you liked the gif, I blurred it so it would have a less porn look to it.

      peace and love

  2. Bravo, Bravo.....I LOVE all of the stream of words totally captivating. You totally immersed your emotions into creating a piece that left me wanting more. Great job

    1. :) Thanks you BC, I always appreciate your nice comments... And thank you for introducing me to the song...

  3. Muy bonito...

    El deseo o el amor no se dominan... No dan tiempo a la reflexión. :)

    Muchos besos

  4. Hay pasiones que no se pueden controlar, aunque parezcan innalcanzables si se lucha se logra el objetivo siempre

    Un besito dulce