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Monday, April 28, 2014

I want to know (Want love is) .... Song poem .... Erotic version ....


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Distant thoughts cloud my mind,
Feelings of old control my thoughts,
The rhythm of my heartbeat

A finger,
A gentle caress,
lifts my head

A kiss..
Soft,
Sweet,
Erase the darkness of my thoughts,
Enlighten my mood,
Reminds me,
Why I'm here

I want to know what love is,
I want you to show me whisper past my lips

Blouse opens,
Fingertip trace the lace of my bra,
Gently pushes its way inside,
Sensations rush inside my sweetness,
As his caressing touch softly swirl on my nipple budding growth

A slight tug,
Bra folds opens,
Breast flesh heave forward,
Into the palm of caring hands

Cupped,
kneaded,
Squeezed,
Flesh softly kissed,
Nipples deeply suckled,
Quivering sensations rush into my loins,
I want to know what love is,
I want you to show me,
I want to feel what love is,
I know you can show me,
Whispers into the air


Caring hands
Undress my flesh,
Lay the exposure of my naked body
Down on satin sheets,
The warmth of his tongue follows the curves of my body,
Dip into my body creases and crevices,
Flicker on my point of origin,
Taste the flavor of my pink sweetness

Legs spread,
Thigh muscles tighten,
Sweet tart juices flow over his lips,
As first ever orgasm,
Tremor my body

Lungs fail too breathe,
Voice fail to scream,
Sweetness forever cream,
I want to know what love is,
I want you to show me,
Consumes the thoughts of my mind

His body centers between my legs,
His hard complexity centers on my sweetness opening,
A thrust,
A grunt,
A quiet inner scream,
Reverberates in my throat,
My sweetness opens for him, 
Like a flower in the early morning sun,
His rock hard complexity falls slowly into my clear wetness 

Each stroke falls deeper inside me then the last,
Surreal sensations rush up my spine,
Blanketing my mind with its ecstasy

My shivering body surrenders to his gentleness,
His quiet passion,
The rhythmic rhythm of his slow, long, thrust
That flows inside my convulsing sweetness without stoppage,
As he show me, what true love feels like



1Manview © 1999 – 2014




18 comments:

  1. How deliciously erotic & sensually arousing ~ Thanks for visiting my blogs ~

    Have a good weekend, smiles ~

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    1. Thank you Heaven, visiting your blogs are always my pleasure. :)

      peace and love
      1manView

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  2. Unas manos que se deslizan por el oasis del placer.

    Un beso.

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    1. Me gusta mucho ese verso. :)
      Gracias
      Agradezco el comentario ..

      un beso
      1 Manview

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  3. Me gusta esa mezcla de pasión y dulzura...

    Beso.

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    1. Gracias ...
      He estado tratando de hacer más de eso ...
      Gracias por la visita y sobre todo me deja un comentario ...

      beso
      1ManView

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    1. Thank you much Paula

      Kisses
      1ManView

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  5. Amazing! I love this very much. I especially love the last line.

    xo

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    1. Thank you Diane, I appreciate the nice comment..

      peace and love
      1Man

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    1. Greetings,
      Thank you so much for the visit and comment

      peace and love
      1manView

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  7. Intense and passionate...as it is supposed to be.
    Loved it!

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    1. I appreciate your visit, and kind comment. :)

      peace and love
      1manView

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  8. Boss poetry.

    "Like a flower in the early morning sun,
    His rock hard complexity falls slowly into my clear wetness

    Each stroke falls deeper inside me then the last,
    Surreal sensations rush up my spine,
    Blanketing my mind with its ecstasy"

    Vivid descriptions, the best kind of prose. Good stuff.

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  9. Thanks Don, I have been working on a more romantic style of prose. I appreciate you caught and liked the lines I was trying... :)

    Peace and love
    1ManView

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  10. Amazing and very sexy I love to read your work

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    1. Thank you very much. i wish the music was working, it was part of the poem...

      I appreciate your comments
      peace and love
      1ManView

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