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Friday, July 24, 2009

Take My Breath Away (2)......... Repetition Poem ....


Soft lips nipple on the bareness of my chest flesh, moisten tongue leaves a wet trail for her warm breath to follow

Spine tingles, back arches as her tongue spirals downward

The softness of her hands rides on the roundness of my butt, as her tongue ride on the tender inside of my thighs… My breath is taken away…

While on bended knees, her tongue dashes across my scrotum, a deep gasp escapes my lips, as her lips gently secure its flesh in the moisten heat in her mouth… My breath is taken away...The tip of her tongue, fills like a sword, as sensations rocket through my groans, as it slithers up the length of my staff

It eases around the crown edge, probing, darting, searching for the sweet spot, once it is found… My breath is taken away... Small tight circles ensues on my delicate spot, legs muscles tremble, as her lips close then suckle on my harden flesh ridge… My breath is taken away...

A steady grip holds my throbbing flesh still, as her tongue washes across the bare head of my harden flesh, darting into the small slit opening, then the bareness of its head is slowly pushed past the softness of her inner lips… My breath is taken away…

Wetness, heat, pressure is applied on my harden flesh, as my harden flesh passes past the softness of her lips… My breath is taken away

Slow head bops slide my harden staff in and out the confines of her mouth, sensations bombard inside my lions, as my white cream starts to fill my sacks…

Moans, groans, pass by my lips, as my eyes watch the length of my harden flesh, disappear and reappear between the softness of her lips again and again… My breath is taken away

The softness of her hand squeeze my scrotum, as her head moves back and forth in a steady rhythmic motion, my staff girth starts to swell, forcing her mouth to open wider, as my fingers intertwine in her hair, pulling her head forward further, pushing my harden flesh head into her throat… My breath is taken away…

My heart beats faster, my legs goes weak, my stomach muscles flatten, as optimum release comes closer to closure, while… Taking my breath away…

Lips grip tighter, legs stiffen, back arches, as my harden flesh palpitates unmercifully, ejaculating my white seed deep into the heat of her mouth, while she sucks every last drop out of my harden flesh, as… My breath is completely, taken away


30 comments:

  1. Ummmmmmmm! que maravilha
    lindo e sensual
    “A amizade é um bem ao alcance de todos. Saiba investir nas pessoas à sua volta. Os amigos valem mais do que verdadeiras preciosidades.”


    Um enorme...


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    Bom fim de semana...

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  2. very erotic, there is a nice flow, and strong images in the prose poem. and again the use of repetition to bind it all together works very well. and it is a very nice companion piece to 'tack my breath away" 1.

    have enjoyed reading both.

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  3. hummm linda e sexy imagem !!!!

    "...basta-me um pequeno gesto,
    feito de longe e de leve,
    para que venhas comigo
    e eu para sempre te leve..."
    ◄Cecília Meireles►
    lindo findi...
    bjkas suaves...

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  4. sensuality at it's best....love your blog!
    bjs de luxo

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  5. Cada pessoa que passa em nossa vida, passa sozinha,é porque cada pessoa é unica e nenhuma substitui a outra !

    cada pessoa que passa em nossa vida passa sozinha e não nos deixa só porque deixa um pouco de si e leva um pouquinho de nós,

    esse é a mais bela responsablidade da vida ,é a prova de que as pessoas não se encontram por acaso.

    um beijo e bom fim de semana

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  6. I like how you end with your breath completely taken away, how satisfying...

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  7. Very hot and enticing. You certainly have a way with words!

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  8. Não preciso falar inglês pra achar esta imagem uma maravilha !! Benza Deus !
    Bom final de semana!
    Besos calientes
    Helô

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  9. O erotismo claroo e quente nas palavras, o calor transparece pela imagem, uma delicia:)
    beijinhos e obrigada pela visita:)

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  10. português » inglês

    very sensual, exciting ... hot ..

    (While on Banded knees, her tongue across my dash Scrotum, a deep gasp escapes my lips, her lips gently to secure its flesh in the heat moisten in her mouth ...)

    I loved it ... rs

    kisses on your heart and thanks for visiting my blog!

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  11. Breath taking my friend ;-)

    xo,
    kitten

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  12. Su lengua recorrio cada poro de su piel para hacerle gemir con cada aliento y cada caricia.
    Poema lleno de sensualidad y de erotismo.

    Besos.

    Lunna.

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  13. Princesa, Obrigado como sempre o meu amigo ..
    Tenha uma boa semana ...

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  14. Finbar, thank you for the compliment, i appreciate you stopping in...

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  15. Fatti, Obrigado meu amigo
    Um beijo ..

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  16. Luxuria sentida ... Obrigado, e eu realmente gosto do seu blog também ..

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  17. Chorizo criollo, Gracias por el comentario y la visita, se agradece ...

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  18. Topaz, I'm pleased you liked it, and thank you for leaving a comment..

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  19. Gray, thank you very much for the praise...

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  20. Helô Müller, Obrigado muito ..
    Um abraço ..

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  21. Palma da Mão, Obrigado e que gostei de visitar-te ...

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  22. Nancy C. Obrigado, e vou estar de volta para ver você em breve ..

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  23. Complicated Kitten, thank you for stopping in my friend.. Hugs...

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  24. Lunna, obrigado ..
    Tenha uma ótima semana ...

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  25. Princesa, tem uma ótima semana
    Um beijo ...

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  26. Very erotic, but oh, the picture. I can't tear my eyes from it... :) !

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  27. Thank you S. I thought the picture was really erotic too..

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