Eyes,
Focus
On his stiff
Hard erection,
My mouth opens wide,
As his scent is inhaled,
Clear running lubrication
Of drool, drips downward on my chin,
Heart races like a thoroughbred’s horse
As my mind anticipates my first taste
Lips ease over large round sensitive gland,
Legs tighten from pleasurable pain,
As lips ease forward and backward,
His erection is suckled
Like a Tootsie roll pop
For the prize inside,
Scrotum squeezed tight,
Vibrations,
White seed,
Freed
Please bear with me as I try to learn to write a Etheree Poem... A Etheree
Poem consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
wow!
ReplyDeleteare delicious image and words!
love it ...
sip, suck ... enjoy !...( lol)
His poems are exciting and delicious!
congrats!
kiss your heart!
Thank you Nancy C. And i think I will go enjoy a sip and suck... lol ...
ReplyDeleteNice visual my friend! You just keep on writing and thrilling us with your erotic poetry. We love it!
ReplyDeletexo,
kitten
p.s. I shut down my blog.
Oh very nice, it did it for me!
ReplyDelete@ complicated Kitten,,, You can't leave me here alone, after alll, you brought me here and showed me a new life style. So after your break, please come back...
ReplyDelete@ Green Eye Frenchy... thank you much...
ReplyDeletethis poem is very sexy, I like alot. and that picture is so hot. I always enjoy your poems
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ReplyDeleteOps sorry I can't spell. Delicious indeed :)
ReplyDeleteLove,
Ronnie
xx
Poetic_Butterfly , thank you, and please come again...
ReplyDeleteronnie, that's OK,.. I'm the master of missed spell words... Thank you for the comment...
ReplyDeleteDeliciously erotic imagery coupled with beautiful poetic rhythm. Gorgeous... xx
ReplyDeleteThe visuals are great I can see the heat in this.
ReplyDeleteCheeky Minx, thanks much, I appreciate comments from one of my favorite poets..
ReplyDeleteSueie, thank you for checking my place out, and leaving a comment... I shall return the favor...
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