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Monday, September 26, 2011

Enhanced ...... Prose Poem ........

Flash Friday Try....

Word Limit: an even number of words

Required Word: It should include a quotation from a poem or song lyrics

(Joss Stone song Spoiled)

Hello, it's me embarks from his voice,

Wrist flips, keys fly onto the end stand,

Eyes widen as his eyes try to focus through the dim lit room,

Why is it so dark in here whispers past his lips?

Just as he steps deeper into the dark of the room,

Out of the shadows a figure quickly slips into his arms

Her sudden tight embrace makes his lungs sigh out,

Once his lungs inhale, her essence floats through his nostrils,

Bringing a peaceful calm to his weary day,

As his hands embrace her tighter, he first realize he's holding nothing but the softness of her naked flesh

The soft breeze of her breath whispers pass his ears

Moments before a warm moist kiss embrace the side of his neck

Goose bumps race up his spine, as she softly suckle on the flesh between her lips

The feel of her firm breast heaving into his chest, makes his heart race

As his hand ease downward on her cotton soft flesh, the feel of the indention in her waist line makes his mind anticipate the feel of the roundness of her taut derrière that was coming next under the sensitive touch of his fingertips,

His loins floods with lustful sensations, as his mind flashes images of the curvature of her tenacious body through it

Hands tremble with blissful passion, as the grip of his left hand sink into the tautness of her small round romp,

Tenderly, his stout grip pulls her long slender body upward off the floor

Long silky smooth legs wraps around him,

As their lips deeply embrace, a sigh emerges in her throat, as the fingertips on his free hand probe on her wetness opening

Arms push into his chest,

Prompting him to release her from his tight embrace,

Slowly she sides off his body,

After taking a half step back she gingerly opens his suit coat

Then playfully, seductively, ease it off the broadness of his shoulders

A flip of her wrist sends his expensive suit coat to the wooden floor,

Then she steps forward and teasingly unzips his suit pants,

After leaving the taste of her sweet deep kiss on his lips, she seductively lie down on his suit jacket, then spread her thighs just wide enough for him to see a potion of her pink world,

He smiles then whispers, "lady, you are so damn spoiled"...

(392 words)
Thanks for the challenge Sweets, it was fun...


  1. Excellent. Love it and the picture perfect.


  2. I'm glad Sweets challenged you to write this! The poem is perfect for the picture. Nicely written, 1man.

  3. "...Goose bumps race up his spine, as she softly suckle on the flesh between her lips..."

    so good ...
    so smooth and exciting.

    I loved the picture!

    Kisses in your heart!


  4. I smiled as I read this entire poem. This is really awesome! I love how it ended, too. Good use of the lyric. I never heard the song before. I like it. Glad you played along. Play some more. ;-)

  5. Muito obrigado pela sua visita, e pelo comentário tão gentil.
    Seu blog é de extremo bom gosto, suas imagens excitantes e seus textos inteligentes,formam uma rara composição.
    Sinta um abraço com todo carinho.

  6. I like your blog, very tasteful.

    Joss Stone ... his music is an extraordinary symbolism

  7. Obrigada pelo comentário, o toque é importante sim e esta musica de Joss Stone convida para isso.

    Bom fim de semana

  8. TS99, Thank you and I shall Play time to time...