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Saturday, October 29, 2011

Ghostbuster .......... Licentia Rhyme Form Poem/Story.....

Licentia Rhyme Form:
A poetic form created by Laura Lamarca,
Consists of at least 3 
12-line stanzas with 11 syllables per line.

I first saw her at a Trick Or Treat party

At my own expense, she laughed loud and hardy

My demeanor was just too simple and plain

For her and her stupid entourage acclaim

It was a fantastic Halloween party

Everyone was dressed up and dancing hardy

I made the mistake of asking her to dance

She acted like I ask her for her under pants

Tall and lean, dressed like a beautiful black witch

But acted more like a tall Lean uppity bitch

Her body was lean and fine I must admit

And when she walked, her butt did a killer switch

She hex me, nobody I ask wanted to dance

I left the party with a gloomy like prance

My heart was heavy, my mind was very said

When I walked out the door, she acted so damn glad

Mind in a deep trance, I walked to my car door

My body flew in the air, I was no more

A drunken fool hit me and ended my shy life

At the end of the tunnel, was a bright light

People were talking near my lifeless body

I heard that Witch say, he wasn't nobody

As I walked through the tunnel, at the bright light

My mind said hold on, lets get something done right

And I want it done before the dawn new light

Before I leave this earth, she'll be in a fright

I'm going to take her soul, to a new height

Even if it takes, the rest of this new life

The rest of the night, her breath smelled like garlic

No one accepted, her sexual frolic

Tonight, I'll be the one licking that pink clit

Then fill her womb, with this ghostly long thick prick

She couldn't believe it, she was home alone

The mighty queen had fallen, off her high throne

There weren't going to be any loud manly groans

As her whip appeal, made him gravel and moan

Her body begged for a soothing hot shower

Still in disbelief, it had lost its powers

All the thoughts in her mind, had gone all sour

Her plan was to shower, at least an hour

She slowly unclothed, first to go was her dress

Unveiling a body worthy, of conquest

Next to come off, where her pink bra and panties

They were made of silk, and was very dainty

My ghostly body zoomed around the bathroom

The sudden cold air blast, made her nipples bloom

It was like looking at them, in vision zoom

When I lay my tongue on them, they will be doomed

She stepped into the steamy hot water fall

Soapsuds ran down her breast, time came to a crawl

Ample round breast, that squeezed real tight to her chest

They lay right next to each other, as they rest

Lovely sight, her body leaning on the wall

With her long luscious legs, making her real tall

A soft touch on her breast, from my ghostly hands

Made her body shiver, shutter, were she stands

As they slid downward, her body starts to shake

When I touched her sacred place, her body quaked

Then I stopped, she felt cold and very alone

A thought of me, brought out a regretful moan

She was playing the part, of a mean old witch

Not knowing, it would leave me dead in a ditch

She quickly dried and went straight to her warm bed

Hoping a long good night sleep, would clear her head

I watch her sleep, in her large bed all alone

It was now time, for her to make her atones

I removed her cover, and touched her soft breast

As her body went, into a quick deep rest

She moaned as her nipples climbed to the night sky

My ghostly tongue touched them, making her eyes cry

Her body bucked, from my tongue downward descends

It was time for her body, to make amends

As my tongue rested on her moist sacred place

Her heart beats loud, as it starts to quickly race

Up and down my tongue worked her small opening

She moaned in my tongue rhythm, as in singing

Her hips bucked, her tummy tucked, as she released

It was first of many, before my tongue ceased

Now it's time, to slide in my round ghostly beast

As I slid it in, she felt my size and heat

She scream so loud, it was heard way down the street

Her pink womb was pushed wide open, by my beast...

My hips thrust slow and hard, rocking her large bed

Her eyes wide open, as popping out her head

Arms extended, but my body wasn't even there

So her arms and legs flung, lifeless in the air

My strokes were long and hard, she begged for a rest

As I flipped her over, she starts to protest

With a firm grip, on her tight to the chest breast

In the doggie position, I stroked her nest

She moaned as passion filled her once lonely soul

In reality, true love, was her real goal

Up and down, in and out, I slid in her womb

The more I poured it on, the more she was doomed

Each long hard stroke, pushed her downward toward her knees

She cried out, make love to me, will you, oh p-l-e-a-s-e

Once on her stomach, I rode on her round butt

Soft with a lovers touch, make her love crust up

Loving soft long thrust, rained into her warm womb

The temperature was getting hot, in the room

Each soft stroke, her head moved upward while she moaned

It felt so good; I let out a ghostly groan

Her body sweated, as I made sweet love to her

The more we made love, the more she seemed a blur

My hands lay on her back, as I thrust deeper

Her body vibrates, as I rode much steeper

Now her body looks, more likes a silhouette

As my release came closer, I started to fret

Once I released, her skin was of a white coat

Who would of guessed, she was just a love-starved ghost

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  2. what a perfect poem for halloween. this is first time i'm learning about licentia rhyme form. incredible that you got 11 syllables per line and 12 line stanza. you're a genius to be able to tell the story of this love-starved ghost this way!

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