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Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Head Day ..... Hunger To Lust ...... Prose Poem ....

With hunger in her eyes, she looks at it with intensity, 
She looks at its length, its girth, and the smooth texture of its outer layer, 
She wanted it; she wanted to taste its flavor, 
She wanted to lick its sides, 
She wanted to feel it melt inside her wet, hot, mouth, 
First a quick lick, then another one to warm it, 
With a firm grip on its shaft, she slowly slid it inside her hungry mouth, 
Once the tip eased passed her lips, she lightly sucked on it, tasting its pleasurable taste, touching her tongue 
Mmm... She moaned, then pushed it inside her mouth deeper, 
In and out her mouth she worked it, slowly taking in more of its girth, while felling her mouth full of its flavor, 
A pop, a sigh, then slowly it parts her lips again and slide further down her hungry mouth, 
She works it back and forth, back and forth, slowly making it succumb to her heat 
The more it succumbs the deeper she takes it, 
Pop, lick, suck, slurp, Mmm... Pop, lick, suck, slurp, Mmm... She saviors its long lasting taste, 
She works it until she has it completely in her mouth, sucking it harder as it withers between her lips, 
Finally, it completely succumbs to her mouth heat, her tongue glides up and down its shaft, tasting, sucking until she has consumed the very last drop of flavor, 
Her eyes fixate on its shaft, as if amazed she took it all, 
I sit across the room jealously watching the whole time, wishing it was I, and not that fudge ice cream bar, she was so happily sucking down her throat 

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    1. Thank you for the comment... First of all, I don't try too often to write. Ideas roll in my head and i write them down for later. Or I'll find a picture of the subject I want to write about and feed off what I see. I'm not a normal writer, that's why I just do it for my own entertainment... Thanks for the visit...

  2. You totally got me with the fudge ice cream bar! Still a very hot poem.

    1. Sometimes my humor gets the best of me. I wrote this after watching my better half wolf down a fudge bar... :) Thanks for the read...