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Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Head day .. Blow-up ....... Prose poem

Out of the dark, articulated moans drifted into the air,
Followed by undertones of his deep breathing,
Slurps, slops, pops join in the sound parade in rhythmic beats,
The taste of him became stronger and stronger with each measured dip of my head, as my lips slid effortlessly up and down the length of his wet stretched velvet soft skin

More and more the length of him pressed deep into my taste, as his hips slowly rotated in synch of my lips sliding rhythm,
As the pace of his harden mass flowing in and out my mouth quickened, hands on his backside steadied me, while pulling his body forward, 
While my lips squeezed tighter on the taut soft skin sliding quickly back and forth between them, the feel of miniature vibrations rumbling through his lower torso was felt on fingertips that pressed deep into his firm buttocks flesh

Strong was the pull of his hands on the back of my head, as he neared his peak
of sensation overload,
Hips thrust as much of his harden flesh inside my mouth it would take, 
As the feel of sensation overload started to burn inside out of his loins,
Steady and hard his hips gyrated, as his breath hitch in sequence,
The deep hip gyrations rocked my head upward on each hard thrust

His body hitched,
His muscles tightened,
His breath hesitated, 
His mouth suddenly opened, letting out low deep moans that ripped into the air, as his body jerked, shook, then trembled with release of orgasm

Hot thick fluid was felt ejaculating deep into the heat of my mouth, its heat made my lungs moan, its taste made my body lust, his body trembled unmercifully making me want the same

Darken air was bombarded with loud moans and bellowing groans, as his length slid deep into my mouth again and again,
His fingertips pull hard on my hair to the point it felt as if it was going to be pulled out by the roots,
Just as the pain became unbearable, his body of whole went limp

Lips suckled on limp smooth flesh, while my mouth swallowed the last trickle of his hot release, darken silence surrounds the presence of both our bodies...

1Manview © 1999 – 2013


  1. Mmm... Mmm... Mmm...

    Some faves:

    "articulated moans drifted into the air"

    "Darken air was bombarded with loud moans and bellowing groans"...

    Mmm... Mmm... Mmm!

    Happy HEAD Day!

    1. Tank you Sweets, computer is down and out...

  2. I know it was meant to be from her perspective but still I was there every thrust of the way! The description was near perfect.

    1. Thank you for the comment and visit. It was very appreciated.

  3. Replies
    1. Always a pleasure to see you Tiffany.

  4. Wow... Amazing approach to description I enjoyed every line thanks for the poem.

  5. Thank you very much Ta Ike ... Your comments are appreciated...

    peace and love