Encircling tongue taste
Drippings of your honeydew
That bask in flavor
That bask in flavor
Tongue stimulation
Flame sensations in your loins
While firm lips swallow
Tasty sweet nectar
From your hot running river
Swim on my palate
As orgasmic bliss
Shake the whole of your body
On my tongue blunt tip
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.Katauta a Japanese poetic form that consists of 17 or 19 syllables arranged in three lines of either 5, 7, and 5 or 5, 7, and 7 syllables. The form was used for poems addressed to a lover, and a single katautawas considered incomplete or a half-poem. A pair of katautas of the 5,7,7 type were called a sedōka; the 5,7,5 katauta may have been the top part of the early tanka.
Your katauta poem is an "orgasmic bliss".
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