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Wednesday, October 26, 2016

A.Katauta poem (Continuous style) ... Still waters


Encircling tongue taste 
Drippings of your honeydew 
That bask in flavor

Tongue stimulation
Flame sensations in your loins
While firm lips swallow

Tasty sweet nectar
From your hot running river
Swim on my palate

As orgasmic bliss
Shake the whole of your body
On my tongue blunt tip

Started as a reply to Wet Bliss Kataula..https://wetblissdotme.wordpress.com/

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 .Katauta  a Japanese poetic form that consists of 17 or 19 syllables arranged in three lines of either 5, 7, and 5 or 5, 7, and 7 syllables. The form was used for poems addressed to a lover, and a single katautawas considered incomplete or a half-poem. A pair of katautas of the 5,7,7 type were called a sedōka; the 5,7,5 katauta may have been the top part of the early tanka

2 comments:

  1. Your katauta poem is an "orgasmic bliss".
    Have a beautiful day.

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  2. Merci beaucoup

    paix et amour
    1ManView

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