I heard this song on girlajustami blog, accomplishing a wonderful short story,
Which sparked my version in a Prose poem form...
Check my friend out at http://lisa-justagirl.blogspot.com/ for a great read...
(Truth or Dare, 6-21-12)
Which sparked my version in a Prose poem form...
Check my friend out at http://lisa-justagirl.blogspot.com/ for a great read...
(Truth or Dare, 6-21-12)
Push play, poem was written in the slow beat of the song:
A slow read folks...
Summer, warm breeze, floats through the black window screens,
Followed by the hue of red, blue, and bright yellow, of the sun rays running away, from the dark that surrounds the glow of the moonlight
Anticipation,
Fear...
Wanting...
Excitement...
Torment my inner feelings,
As friends prepare to become forever lovers
Kids that played cowboys and Indians,
Me, always the cowgirl tied up to the tree,
You, always the cowboy, coming to my rescue
I remember, the first time we met,
You, the new kid on the block, running down the street,
Me, running towards you, acting like I didn't see you,
Head on, we met, and we both lost our two front teeth,
Not knowing that at that moment, life had brought us together, to become more then just friends
I remember,
Two friends, who bedrooms faced each other,
Two friends, who stood at their windows, and shared the moonlight bright glow, in the still of the night,
Two friends, who kept each other company at the windows, as the thunderstorms shook their homes, with all its might,
Two friends, who loved the feel of the cool summer night breeze, as it gently flowed through their window screens, onto their tiny faces, as they shared a smiling, stare of friendship
But now,
Boy, is a full grown man,
Tall, sleek, muscular, gentle,
Embraces the soft flesh of a woman, whose once straight girly figure is now full of womanly curves, whose short curly hair, now flows over the shoulder of a idealistic woman
Tonight, the moment has come,
A moment, I have waited for such a long time,
A moment, where we become more then friends,
A moment, of a start of a new life together,
A moment, I have dream of most of my life,
Where you and I, unite as one
Shaky fingertips, ease over washboard stomach,
As unsteady fingers, stroke over bare round breast flesh,
A deep soft kiss, steadied our nerves,
As a rush of lust, gathers in our loins
Hearts race,
Bodies, presume the missionary position,
Penetration, is followed by a memorable pain,
A pain, that turns into an unforgettable pleasure,
As the thunder of love, passion, and lust, rushes through our souls
I've been waiting for this, for such a long time,
Waited, all this time, to make love to you,
Waited, all this time, for you, to make love to me
Summer breeze gradually blows across our bodies,
As we lay close to the window,
Fingertips mesh as one,
As bodies intertwine,
Gentle deep strokes fall slowly in my mist,
Sensations of wants, grip my soul,
Whispers of love, seek my ears,
As strokes of a genteel friend, slowly falls between my legs, with the passion of a lover
A lover, who unites us as one,
A lover, whom like I, has waited for this all his life
Lips urgently greet deeply,
Hips gyrate hard, fast, and furious,
The sensation of his swell penetrating the dark depths inside me sends my body into convulsions
Hips gyrate quickly,
Minds flash of the past,
A tied up damsel, a hero coming to her rescue,
A memory that will last forever, just like this moment of feeling his forth coming
Coming, inside me for the very first time tonight,
A coming, that consummates us as husband and wife,
A moment, we have waited for all our life's...
1Manview © 1999 – 2012
oh my god!!!!
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i LOVED this!
the music was the perfect background to your
gorgeous words. nice!
Again you put a big smile on my face. Thank you lisa..
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1Manview
I love that song and now I love it even more after reading the words you put to it. Thanks IMV.
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Ronnie
xx
Much appreciated comment Ronnie. Thank you :)
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1ManView ..
Palavras perfeitas, ao ler é como sentir...
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Beijos
Sofia
Obrigado Sofia, eu aprecio o seu comentário ...
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1Manview
This kind of intensity is breathtaking. Gorgeous, 1manview...
ReplyDeleteA humble smile and a big thank you Cheeky Minx...
ReplyDeleteI love the history and build-up in this poem to the best part in the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you sweets, i had missed this comment so how. Always a treat to see you...
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1ManView