Golden candle light reflects off you skin
Soft music surrounds and fills the room
Your back rest a warm body contour to you
My view a glimpse of heaven
Creamy white round breasts
Glistening in the light
Tipped by stiff nipples
Standing out proud and challenging
Muscled, tanned, and shapely legs
Rise out of the warm water
Like Venus rising from the ocean
The round curve of your hips
Smooth and enticing
Easier felt than seen
Hide just below the surface
Hidden by the bubbles and your firm thighs is the greatest pleasure
The dark curly hair concealing
The warm wet treasure
My greatest desire
This is my view
My idea of heaven
(C) Wandering Writer
Wandering Writer is new to writing short stories and poetry. This is his first posted poem.
I"m sharing it with you because not only is this the very first poem he has written, it's a very good poem, and I think he will be an excellent writer in the near future. All comments are welcomed. And please visit his space and leave a comment, even if it's just a hello to blog land... This is were you will find his blog. Thank you-1ManView
Buen dia, pasare a visitar a tu amigo escritor ..bonita percepción del cielo sin duda la mejor ..AbrAZOS
ReplyDeleteGracias por compartir estos versos. Siempre es desagradecer que otras personas se acuerden de nosotros, nos echen una mano.
ReplyDeleteEste es su cielo lleno de espuma... Me ha gustado. Iré a visitarle.
Mil gracias y un beso.
Uhmmm me encantan las imágenes y la espuma de tus palabras que acarician la piel.
ReplyDeleteUn placer leerte y mil gracias por siempre acompañarme en mi rinconcito.
Besos.