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Sunday, August 16, 2020

Erotic Song Poem - Take my breath away Revisited


Soft lips nibble on the bareness of my chest flesh, moisten tongue leaves a wet trail for  her warm breath to follow

Spine tingles, back arches as her tongue spirals downward.

Soft hands ride on my buttocks roundness, while her tongue rides on my tender inner thigh flesh.

"My breath is taken away."


While on bend-ed knees, her tongue dashes across my scrotum, a deep gasp escapes my lips as her lips gently secure its flesh in the moisten heat of her mouth. 

"My breath is taken away."  


 

The tip of her tongue feels like a sword, as sensations rocket through my groans, as it slithers up the length of my staff

It eases around the crown edge, probing, darting, searching for the sweet spot, once found-  

"My breath is taken away." 


Small tight circles ensue on my delicate spot, legs muscles tremble, and her lips close then suckle on my hardened flesh ridge. 

"My breath is taken away."


A steady grip holds my throbbing manhood still, as her tongue washes across the bare head of my hardened flesh, darting into the small slit opening, the bareness of its head slowly pushed past the softness of her inner lip.  

"My breath is taken away."


Wetness, heat, and pressure are applied to my hardened flesh as it passes past the softness of her pouted lips.

"My breath is taken away."


Slow head bobs slide my hardened staff in and out the confines of her moist mouth. Surreal sensations bombard the inside of my lions, as my white cream gathers and fill my scrotum sacks.

"My breath is taken away."


Moans, groans, pass my lips, as my eyes watch the elongated length of my harden flesh, disappear and reappear between the softness of her lips firm grip repetitively. 

"My breath is taken away."


The softness of her hand squeezes my scrotum, as her head moves back and forth in a quick, steady rhythmic motion. My staff girth starts to swell, forcing her mouth to open wider as my fingers intertwine into her hair, pulling her head forward further, which pushes the bulbous head of my unceasingly palpitating staff into her throat.

"My breath is taken away."

My heart beats faster; my legs become weak, my stomach muscles flatten, as optimum release becomes closer to closure while-

"Taking my breath away."


Lips grip tighter; legs stiffen, back arches, as my harden flesh palpitates unmercifully, ejaculating my white seed deep into the heat of her mouth, while she sucks every drop of cum out of my harden flesh, as_

My breath is utterly, taken away."



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10 comments:

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    1. Your comment was appreciated Wandering Writer.

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  2. Un texto donde describir con exactitud cada paso a seguir, en ese momento de sensualidad y sexualidad.
    Un abrazo y feliz semana.

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    1. Muchas gracias por el lindo comentario. Fue apreciado.

      paz y amor
      Vista de 1 hombre

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  3. Every word is precious and inspiring, well done.

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    1. Thank you very much Nightly sun.

      Be safe
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  4. I love how much emotion you imparted in this poem.

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    1. 😊Thank you very much Minielle Labraun. I tried to match the emotion in the song.

      peace and love
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  5. Los dibujos son magníficos, lástima que sean tan pequeñines. Merecen más espacio para que tus letras sean confirmación de todo ello. Sublime el detalle, la sensualidad, la provocación...
    Un beso.

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    1. Estás en lo correcto. Todavía me estoy acostumbrando al nuevo blogger. Agradezco tus amables palabras ...

      Un beso 🌹
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